People’s lives are now surrounded by advertisement. This affects what people consider important and has a negative impact on people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays,

played a vital role in people's

life

. While some population argued that it has a disadvantage support on people's

life

. In my opinion, I completely agree with

this

and

this

essay will discuss the reasons.

Firstly

modified the mind of people with a

lot

of skims which progress a negative impact on the heart of people.

In other words

, people all time wants to buy something in a short amount of

money

, but when they saw the

lot

of offers on the

they became interested and spend a

lot

money

from their job salaries. By the result of that, they cannot service the other issues of families as well as own problems which are popular issues these days.

For example

, my younger brother spends his salary for buying a mobile phone which gives him another phone free, but when he was suffering on health disease he cannot go to doctor only for

money

problems. To summarize, people should not focus on

for a well calculated happier

life

Secondly

, there is a

lot

of fake

for cheat with people on the internet which are destroying the belief of people in advertising.In short, fake

on the social sites offering some fake skims and people are attracting on these as well as spending a

lot

money

Accept space

Then

the skimmers collect the

money

and close the

which they created on the internet.

For instance

, my cousin Faruk recently showed me an offer which was studying in Canada for free as well as without IELTS, I advised him that it is a fake offer,

although

, interestingly, while he spends around one thousand dollars on the site of the skimmer, the website got closed.To repeat in short, some fake

decreasing the trust of people in advertising which is another negative reason. To conclude,

has some benefit issues.

Although

, I personally completely agree that the

has a negative impact on the

life

of the population.

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People’s lives are now surrounded by advertisement. This affects what people consider important and has a negative impact on people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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