Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A zoo has no useful purpose. Use specific reasons and examples to explain your answer.

#zoo #purpose

I think that the question about whether a

zoo

has no useful purpose is the one

that is

open for debate. It is a topical question nowadays. Some people believe that a

zoo

has an essential and cognitive purpose.

However

, other people believe that a

zoo

has no useful purpose and people should observe wild animals in their nature. Personally, I think that both options have their advantages. In the following paragraphs I will

analyze

consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning

analyse

these points and present my own view in

favor

promote over another

favour

of people who think that animals should not be kept in a

zoo

. From the one side, a

zoo

has many benefits for people.

First

of all, children can learn about

animals not

Accept comma addition

animals, not

only from books and TV programs but from actually watching them alive. They can see animals, touch them and even feed them. I think it is an amazing experience for a child. He gains more knowledge and experience from

this

"communication" with an animal.

Second

of all, a

zoo

is a perfect place for adults to see many animals that people are not able to see in their lives.

However

, from the other side, I keep asking myself "What kind of benefits wild animals have from a

zoo

?". Unfortunately, I can not find any of them. I think that wild animals should live in their

natur

Suggestion

natural

e environment.

Moreover

, I think that we should observe them through TV programs sitting in our

favorit

something regarded with special favor or liking

favourite

e chairs, or people who like danger should try to observe them in the native environment. I think that animals are not toys. I know that most zoos try to keep their animals in the environment which is close to their native, but they can not give them as much freedom as animals want to. To sum up, I think that wild animals should not be kept in a

zoo

. Personally, I enjoy more watching "Discovery Channel"

then

watching a black bear who does not know where to hide from the scorching sun in a Texas

zoo

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A zoo has no useful purpose. Use specific reasons and examples to explain your answer.

Fully explain your ideas

Governments should speand money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people say that a country should produce food locally, while others believe that it is good to import food. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion and relevant examples.

Some working parents think that childcare centres provide the best care for children who are still too young to go to school. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better carers for their children.

Many people believe that international tourism is a bad thing for their country. What are the advantages and disadvantages that bring to them

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Some people prefer to work on school projects with a group, while others would rather work alone. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. Write at least 250 words.