Some people think that the best way to solve global environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Environmental pollution has been a major concern in today’s society, and to mitigate
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problem some people argued that the best way to solve the global environmental issues is to raise the price of oil to deal with the problem. While I believe that it may help to improve the environment matter to a certain extent, other steps are essential to face the issue.
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with, increasing the price of petrol can help reduce environmental pollution to some degree.
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is because the excessive use of the vehicle produces the most amount of carbon dioxide to the atmosphere which is detrimental to the environment. If the price of oil is increased, individual people will stop using their cars to reduce the
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, the rise in fuel
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always determines the market prices of all goods and
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increasing
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the property of having material worth (often indicated by the amount of money something would bring if sold)
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the middle class and poor families. I believe that the increase in the
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of fuel will not stop environmental pollution.
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, governments can take other measures to deal with the issue.
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, governments can increase funding to find an alternative source of
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such
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as solar panels, wind
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. To illustrate
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the CEO of Tesla and Solar
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"Elan Mask" said, that if the government funds his project of solar panels, he will completely able to remove the dependency on non-renewable resources like coal and petrol. And
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solar power in the USA has proven its efficiency in
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production.
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, the government can encourage more people to switch to electric cars to protect the environment. In conclusion, I believe that to increase the
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of fuel is not an appropriate way to solve the environmental problem. Renewable
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sources are better alternatives to deal with
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issue, and authority can motivate people to use an electric car.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • emissions
  • alternative energy
  • conservation
  • mitigate
  • renewable energy technologies
  • affordability
  • collective action
  • innovation in energy efficiency
  • global cooperation
  • environmental measures
  • pollution
  • economic disparity
  • revenue
  • sustainable development
  • environmental sustainability
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