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In some areas of the US, a 'curfew' is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about that?

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Recently, there are some laws which
has been introduced
Suggestion
have been introduced
 to organize the presence of adolescents outdoors late in the evening.
Personally I
Accept comma addition
Personally, I
 totally support these laws for the betterment of these teens, and I will show
this
 below.
To begin
 with, these considerations would  guarantee
detering
try to prevent; show opposition to
deterring
 some dangers away from these teenagers.
For instance
, some drug dealers can be found in
streets
Suggestion
the streets
 in midnight, and they can influence some teens to purchase from them. And because of they are in a critical age group, adolescence,  the presence of adults is strongly recommended because they can raise young adults' awareness about these hazardous materials, which will absolutely  destroy their health. Unless teens  were under close supervision
in
Suggestion
during
 these  late hours, they would be exposed to drug addiction.
In addition
,
this
 trend will possibly act as a kind of protection for teenagers. To illustrate, they may be attacked by criminals to steal their money or phones,
also
 they can be in danger to be injured.
Furthermore
, they
ar
a unit of surface area equal to 100 square meters
are
 supposed to join  gangs which are spreading in some areas waiting to hunt new easily influential members. So as to avoid that, it seems that these teens are recommended to be accompanied by
adult
Suggestion
an adult
. To conclude,
inacting
order by virtue of superior authority; decree
enacting
 laws
such
 as a 'curfew' in the Unites States is paramount because they can get teenagers secured and prevent some hazards to be
occures
under a curse
accursed
, and I wholeheartedly agree with that for
better life
Suggestion
a better life
 for people in teenage.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • enforce
  • juvenile
  • repercussions
  • autonomy
  • adolescence
  • paternalistic
  • delinquency
  • municipality
  • ordinance
  • authoritarian
  • peer pressure
  • social dynamics
  • civil liberties
  • community policing
  • preventative measures
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