Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
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health increasing
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amoung
of sport facilities can be helped. a quantity of money
amount
Wherease
, other people are Suggestion
Whereas
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Worse
incliened
that different measures can be helped to overcome unhealthy situation. In my opinion, not only sport activities can help but (often followed by 'to') having a preference, disposition, or tendency
inclined
also
another preventation
can needed.
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health
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Other words
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to an unspecified thing, agency, amount, etc.
something
some things
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fit, Suggestion
keep ping
such
as be
careful with what they eatSuggestion
being
,
Accept space
,
for example
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grass
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problems. Suggestion
health
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a modern sickness
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. Suggestion
the US
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dinner too late. Suggestion
make
are made
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stemming
streaming
health
and getting them unhealth
.
not in or exhibiting good health in body or mind
unhealthy
On the other hand
, it is clearly seen that responsibilities of these problems do not their duty sufficiently and effectively. To accomplish this
trouble mostly people have to teaching
by government or Suggestion
teach
health
institutions. May be as the many believe that the number of sport facilities should be going up.Finding filter should be compulsory by industries and government make sense of this
rule. Meanwhile, the health
establishments are given
lectures. Suggestion
give
As a result
, people will keep healthy.
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up, Suggestion
To sum
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some people believe that going up exercise centers
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centres
however
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to teach
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