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The internet has greatly increased our access to information. To what extent do you think this is a good thing? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experienc

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This
 topic highlights a controversial topic and widespread phenomenon that the advent of
internet
 has gradually prompted the exposure to vast quantities of information among citizens of the civilized world. Personally, I am of the opinion that
this
 is definitely a positive trend.
Firstly
,
Accept space
,
a
internet
 has become indispensable in all business operations as it has helped to achieve better results. Tools
such
 as online e-commerce sites amazon, and social media sites like Facebook, Twitter, and Instagram has bridged the gap between supplier and consumers. Companies are investing in advertising their products online to reach more customer thanks to
this
 practice.
This
 not only resulted in, more options for the buyers but
also
knowledge
 to make an informed decision.
For instance
, Big brands like Nike and Adidas has been using social networking platforms as a great source to promote their brands among Asian markets.
As a result
, Asian consumers can now access the same products like gym shirts and shoes that are of considerable higher standards than the products they were subjected buy in from local market.
Furthermore
, from the perspective of education,
internet
 has been a great source of information for youngsters as well to notable scientists. Scientific paper and journals publicly uploaded on websites are available for public reviewing which has provided benefits to the students, as the
knowledge
 gained from these sources can be applied for research and developments to improve the technologies in the future.
For instance
, Thanks to the digital platforms like google and education portals
such
 as stack-overflow, geeks for geeks, and online e-books helped the students to learn new technologies around the world to improve their
knowledge
 in technologies
such
 as machine learning and artificial intelligence.
This
 resulted in better solutions for jobs hand-operated and making them automatic. In conclusion, from my personal
knowledge
,
internet
 increases availability of information, and provides numerous positive developments in the society.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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