Many people judge success solely by money and material possessions. However, success can be achieved or measured in other way. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

Since time immemorial, people love to be successful in life. The majority of the population beli
eve tha
depends only on owning an expensive car, living in a bungalow and generally enjoying a sophisticated life.
may indeed be true;
, I strongly believe that there are other ways to become a successful person.
, in terms of education; passing an exam or completing a course is considered to be succ
essful activity.
a successful activity
For example
, if a child in grade I attained good marks in the exam
, it is recognised as an achievement.
In addition
, when a student earns a degree or master's in education, university conduct convocation ceremonies for
is an indicator of
be achieved through work. From layman to white collar jobs has its own dignity and respect.
In other words
, a person who owns a coffee shop can be successful if he has job satisfaction and career fulf
illment. No
a feeling of satisfaction at having achieved your desires
wadays, most companies encourage their employees by providing certificates like best employee of the mont
h which cle
Accept comma addition
month, which
arly shows
in their jobs.
be achieved in family life
Accept comma addition
life, such
as by raising and supporting a family. It is often said that home is the
school and parents are the best teachers for a child.
, if children are nourished in a proper way,
definitely it is recognised as a successful pare
In conclusion, nowadays most people believe that
is indicated by only on wealth and materialistic values, but in my opinion, there are many other ways to be successful.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation


To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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