Doing an enjoyable activity with a child can develop better skill and more creative than reading to what extent do you agree or disagree use reason and specific example for to explain your answer.

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Nowadays practical knowledge

become

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becomes

more popular in whole world some people think that doing an interesting and creative

activity

with a

child

. It can be a developed good

skill

and it is more creative rather than reading. I partly agree with the statement.

before

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Before

committing my

opinion what

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opinion, what

the views are discussed in

further

paragraph with suitable examples. The

first

of all practical skills is to improve the

child

's thinking and

also

make them more creative introvert

moreover

Many practical activities the

child

can grow up mentally and physically

for

example in

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example, in

school is some theory very difficult to explain like electric generator braking system of the car and more

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because It

is very difficult for

teacher

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teachers

the teacher

to draw

structure

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the structure

of theory while in

practical

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practically

all part is visible for

student

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students

and it is quite easy for

learner

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learners

the learner

a learner

to understand

in addition

to the interesting

activity

children can be doing more focus on perfect equal work. In

fact many

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fact, many

parents. I prefer to buy mechanical games and instrument for

child

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children

the child

. It can be improved thinking power and physical power.

However reading is

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However, reading is

a useful

activity

for all people. It is the base of all activities in life without basic

knowledge practical

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knowledge, practical

cannot be possible enjoyable

activity

history history

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history, history

can not be learned by

practical

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practice

in the subject reading is important apart from Trees by doing more and more enjoyable

activity

children can be addicted by it and

also

its effect on study. To conclude reading is a basic necessity for all children to know gender information about

topic but

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the topic, but

the topic but

more and more activities are important in my view practical

skill

activities are more beneficial for

child

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children

the child

a child

with our improve their imagination

skill

as well as physical

skill

Tue Dec 31 2019

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Doing an enjoyable activity with a child can develop better skill and more creative than reading to what extent do you agree or disagree use reason and specific example for to explain your answer.

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Some people argue that technological interventions such as mobile phones are making people socially less interactive. Do you agree or disagree?

Today, the quality of life in large cities is decreasing. What is the reason ? What can be done to resolve this problem?

Some people think that success in life comes from hard-working and determination, while others think that there are more important factors such as money and appearance. Discuss both views and give your opinion.