Doing an enjoyable activity with a child can develop better skill and more creative than reading to what extent do you agree or disagree use reason and specific example for to explain your answer.

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Nowadays practical knowledge
become
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becomes
more popular in whole world some people think that doing an interesting and creative
activity
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with a
child
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. It can be a developed good
skill
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and it is more creative rather than reading. I partly agree with the statement.
before
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Before
committing my
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opinion, what
the views are discussed in
further
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paragraph with suitable examples. The
first
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of all practical skills is to improve the
child
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's thinking and
also
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make them more creative introvert
moreover
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Many practical activities the
child
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can grow up mentally and physically
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example in
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example, in
school is some theory very difficult to explain like electric generator braking system of the car and more
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because It
is very difficult for
teacher
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teachers
the teacher
to draw
structure
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the structure
of theory while in
practical
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practically
all part is visible for
student
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students
and it is quite easy for
learner
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learners
the learner
a learner
to understand
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to the interesting
activity
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children can be doing more focus on perfect equal work. In
fact many
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fact, many
parents. I prefer to buy mechanical games and instrument for
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child
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children
the child
. It can be improved thinking power and physical power.
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However reading is
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However, reading is
a useful
activity
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for all people. It is the base of all activities in life without basic
knowledge practical
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knowledge, practical
cannot be possible enjoyable
activity
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more
history history
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history, history
can not be learned by
practical
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practice
in the subject reading is important apart from Trees by doing more and more enjoyable
activity
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children can be addicted by it and
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its effect on study. To conclude reading is a basic necessity for all children to know gender information about
topic but
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the topic, but
the topic but
more and more activities are important in my view practical
skill
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activities are more beneficial for
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child
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children
the child
a child
with our improve their imagination
skill
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as well as physical
skill
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.

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