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A university education should be free for all students. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#university #education #students
University
education
 should be free to all students
,
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,
 not all parts of the world
agrees
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agree
 with that statement as paid
education
 contribute a major chunk to the government of the country for the growth, but I sincerely agree that that
university
education
 should be free
nonetheless
 for each and every
students
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student
. With regards, to free
education
 few developed
country
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countries
 provide free
university
education
,
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,
 while
rest
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the rest
 of the
countries
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country
 has both free and low tuition fees colleges. I would like to state two countries and the
university
education
 which I agree and disagree with let’s start with
India which
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India, which
 produces the highest number of engineers and college graduates, where it provides free
education
 to many students via scholarship and government college where the state or central government
subsidise
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subsidies
subsidy
 the tuition fees to all students enrolled into the colleges.
whereas
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Whereas
 United States of America where the college tuition fees cost so high they are in debt for the rest of their life. A
statistics
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statistic
 showed the student loan debt is 1.4 trillion US dollars. Whereas many Scandinavian and European countries offer free
education
 for their citizens and others. When students
thinks
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think
education
 as a burden they would be worried much about the debt than the
education
itself which
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itself, which
 is not really a good for countries which has high demand of STEM students. The best example
for
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of
 the free
education
 is
Germany where
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Germany, where
 the free
university
education
 is available to every student other countries should follow the suit. In conclusion
,
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,
 I agree to
full
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the fullest
 extent that
university
education
 should be free to each and every student for the betterment of everyone.

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