In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this?

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The crowded cities nowadays are in demand for new residential

areas but

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areas, but

because of the shortage

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space, houses need to be built in the

countryside

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. A certain group of people opines that

this

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could pose damage to the

countryside

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environment. I believe construction in an environment-friendly way will be beneficial.

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with, the ever-expanding population has ceased the availability of land in cities and other metropolitan areas. The only available option is to migrate the residence to less populated available land,

that is

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in the

countryside

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This

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phenomenon of migration will help to decrease the burden from the cities and

also

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will boon the

countryside

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economically.

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, I myself travel almost an hour to reach my workplace as I am staying in the

countryside

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, it is true that the equilibrium in the village side may be disrupted because of the influx of foreign cultures and methodologies. But it could be kept constant by various steps taken by the government to preserve the

naturality

nonparticipation in a dispute or war

neutrality

of the area. To cite an example, the place where I reside has a strict

law not

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law, not

to damage the gardens and playgrounds.

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, the construction plan is fixed for all buildings with a central park which is planted with a variety of flora helping to control pollution. To conclude, the new construction plans for living in the

countryside

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is quite a good option but preservation of the local environmental issues should be kept in mind before

such

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a migration.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.5

Complete response

7.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

250 words

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Urbanization
Ecological benefits
Biodiversity conservation
Carbon sequestration
Sustainable development
Eco-friendly building materials
Green architecture
Government policies
Urban sprawl
Infrastructure
Smart planning
Agricultural lands
Rural areas
Population growth
Environmental sensitivity

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Include an introduction and conclusion

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More and more people tend to watch foreign movies, so the local government should encourage the development of local film industry. To what extent do you agree or disagree?