Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Few people are in favour of passing
information
among people for scientific, business
and academic interest. While, there are
another group who does not agree to share all Suggestion
is
information
especially important one .
I personally believe that, sharing knowledge is always beneficial for the progress of Accept space
.
world
.
In the contemporary era, distributing knowledge regarding trade, education and science is prevailing day by day. It Suggestion
the world
always help
in development and research, that allow inventions targeting to improve quality of life. By sharing Suggestion
always helps
informations
, everyone can know about new researches, ideas and education standard of a message received and understood
information
remote world
, that allows every society to improve their level. Suggestion
the remote world
Business
policies of different companies can teach smaller traders to progress and help in expanding business
over larger scale that can be mutually beneficial for smaller, larger or business
parties of different countries. For instance
, by sharing information
regarding space science by NASA promoted other countries space programme
to give their contribution to solve hidden mystery of space as done by INDIA. Suggestion
an other countries space programme
the other countries space programme
Futhermore
, in addition
Furthermore
nowa days
Suggestion
now a day's
now a days
nowadays
business
of many companies increased
globally by understanding each others policies. In Suggestion
has increased
last decade
about 11 percents students migrated from INDIA to UK for higher education, Suggestion
the last decade
that is
made possible only due to dissemination of information
.
Conversely
, few people are in favour of restricting important informations
to its original source only. Many secret documents of defence if exposed a message received and understood
information
publically
, can create in a manner accessible to or observable by the public; openly
publicly
security issue
for Suggestion
a security issue
security issues
country
. Suggestion
the country
countries
Similarly
, many goverments
policies like budget can not be exposed before its Suggestion
government
governments
governments'
government's
implimentaion
as that can cause chaos In the act of accomplishing some aim or executing some order
implementation
country
. Suggestion
the country
For instance
, in 2018 Indian goverment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
implimented
demonetisation to attack on black money and fake currency. forced or compelled or put in force
implemented
This
remained successful due to secrecy maintained in whole process
.
In conclusion, sharing Suggestion
the whole process
information
is always prove
to be beneficial for Suggestion
is always proving
has always proven
is always proven
always proves
betterment
of society and word. While, care should be taken to reveal Suggestion
the betterment
information
concerning national security. I wholeheartedly agree to dispense information
and data for improving and upbringing of human lives.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite