Television Sport shows such as the Olympics are a good source of motivation for our youths who do not like to exercise much. Do you agree or disagree?

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The best option for motivating youngsters to exercise is controversial. Some people claim watching Olympics on
television
is the best method to get motivated, especially for the youths who do not want to exercise. I completely disagree with
this
, watching the Olympics on the
television
might make them lethargic as they are just sitting idle in front of the
television
and
instead
they can start physical activity by participating in some friendly matches.
Firstly
, nowadays the youngsters are lazy to do exercises.
In addition
, by watching the Olympics on TV they are actually doing more harm than good. Because they end up watching for the long hours they might gain weight.
Moreover
, there is no guarantee that everyone who watches the Olympics to get motivated and start doing exercises.
For example
,
although
my cousin is a big fan of Hussain Bolt the great sprint runner, still she never thought of running for herself.
Therefore
, watching Olympics on
television
is a not a good option to motivate the youths.
Secondly
,
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The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

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  • Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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