Some say that sports play an important role in society. Others, However, think that it is nothing more than a leisure activity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some
would argued
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would argue
that
sport
activity is
more essential
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most essential
component in
wide
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the wider
world. While others say that it just sort of entertainment activity. In
this
essay, I will discuss both beliefs and convinced that
sport
competition is a vital role in society because that represented the patriotism and solidarity of the country.
First
all, one supportive claim that
sport
is leisure events since people don't actually involve sports competition. More specifically, audio and spectacular most likely to set in front of television or beside a stadium just watching it. I am a shining example, when I went to Taiwan baseball stadium,
marjoirty
the property resulting from being or relating to the greater in number of two parts; the main part
majority
spectacular and I were just eating food and watching games, no one can participate the baseball game
,
Accept space
,
it
it is
it's
just like
lesiure
time available for ease and relaxation
leisure
lesser
laser
activity.
Nevertheless
, I
'm firmly believe
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firmly believe
firmly believed
've firmly believed
that
sport
is not only play
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is not only playing
the role of solidarity but
also
patriotism. The primary reason is because that
athletes
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athlete
represented every
nations
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nation
, whatever
sport
player won a championship, entire
citizensh
a native or naturalized member of a state or other political community
citizens
in the country will
pround
feeling self-respect or pleasure in something by which you measure your self-worth; or being a reason for pride
proud
of them and cheer for them. Case a point, Jeremy Lin, who used to be a well-known basketball player in
NBA
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the NBA
. He is not only influenced basketball in Taiwan, but
also
showed Taiwanese
sopport
give moral or psychological support, aid, or courage to
support
him and cheer for him up. In conclusion,
although
sport
could be
a
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an
entertainment
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entertaining
game, but most important things is that show human being can unite and value their own country.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • social fabric
  • fostering
  • community spirit
  • health and wellness
  • national pride
  • leisure activity
  • entertainment
  • unwind
  • economic impact
  • generating jobs
  • boosting tourism
  • stimulating local economies
  • negative aspects
  • risk of injuries
  • pressure on young athletes
  • doping
  • corruption
  • essential societal component
  • responsible management
  • promoting
  • significant
  • merely
  • contributing
  • progress
  • acknowledging
  • value
  • emphasizing
  • balance
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