large company in your area has decided to spend a certain amount of money, either to sponsor a local children’s sports team for two years, or to pay for two open-air concerts. It has asked for feedback from the general public. Write a letter to the company. In your letter: describe the benefits of sponsoring the sports team summarise the benefits of paying for the concerts say how you think the company should spend the money
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I would like to express my appreciation for your decision to spend money on the benefits of our community either to sponsor a local juvenile sports team or to arrange two concerts.
Undoubtedly, your support of a junior sports team will have a positive impact on our player's future. Despite the fact that our sports community suffers from the lack of professional facilities or even perfect coaches, I believe your support can tackle some of our problems.
On the other hand
, financing for two open-air concerts will both excite people and attract tourists. Also
, this
milestone will motivate young musicians to attend and dedicate their talents in public.
Though both supporting will be appreciated by the local people. I believe, vividly, with the least chance of gathering and enjoying these days due to the technological lifestyle concerts would be a far better idea.
I would profoundly thank your firm's decision and your willingness to support the community.Submitted by qazaalameri on
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