Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Some would believe that extinction of certain plants and animals
from
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of
the planet is the primary environmental
problem
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of our time, while others say that there are more valuable environmental issues. While the extinction of particular plants and animals has broken the chain of
ecosystem
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the ecosystem
an ecosystem
, I believe that
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rise
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a rise
the rise
in sea level because of global warming is more life-threatening. On the one hand, extinction of particular plants and animals has broken the ecological system.
This
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is to say that every species in the world are
inter-related
reciprocally connected
interrelated
to each other, so when one is out from the relation
then
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others
also
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falls down.
For example
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, research conducted by The Himalayan Times revealed that the number of
tiger
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tigers
is decreasing every year because the numbers of deer, which is their main food, have declined in a rapid way over the years.
However
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, I think
this
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is not the main threat to the humankind today, in fact,
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rise
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the rise
a rise
in global temperature has turned into the most prominent
problem
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at
this
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time.
On the other hand
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, the primary
problem
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humans are facing today is the
rise
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in sea level because of the global warming.
This
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means, as the temperature of
Earth
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the Earth
is rising every day
in
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at
the fastest pace, people are more concerned about the level of ice
that is
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being molten every day that could enter into the communities living near
sea
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the sea
.
For instance
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, a recent survey conducted by the BBC News reported that people living in the
coastel
of or relating to a coast
coastal
castle
areas are in the biggest fear of all time as the
rise
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of the water in
ocean
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the ocean
could swipe their entire community overnight.
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, I think global warming is the main
problem
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that human is dealing with today. In conclusion,
although
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the chain of ecological system is broken because of the loss of certain species of plants and animals, I think that global warming is the main important issue that humans should worry about because it is able to swipe the entire human
existance
the state or fact of existing
existence
from the planet.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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