Some people think that success is the best measure for intelligence, while others think that intelligence can be measured in other ways. What is your opinion?

There is a dispute whether the achievement of a higher social status it the most suitable way to evaluate
or if there are other manners to estimate it. I am of the opinion that being successful is not important for everyone. The arguments against and
methods that are available to
consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning
intelligence I will discuss in
essay. The most important reason why success is not the right way to assess intelligence is the fact that it is not the only goal, intelligent people want to achieve. In fact, there are other goals
as the pursue of happiness or the opportunity for self-realization that people, nowadays, are attracted to. A good example for
the young
the younger
generation. Statistics have shown that for them leisure time and personal fulfilment
more important than working hard to get a high position at work.
can not be defined by one parameter due to the fact, that it is composed of several skills, the individual has
occurring among members of a family usually by heredity
and/or developed through life. In general, these can be organized in social skills,
as team spirit or the ability to emphasize, and in educational skills, including logical thinking or numeracy. One clear example of a method to evaluate these competences is the assessment-
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
that every applicant has to pass through before starting a practical training. In conclusion, measuring the
by people's success is not the most effective method.
In contrast
, it is only one goal
having the capacity for thought and reason especially to a high degree
people are
following in order to overtake or capture or as accompaniment to such pursuit
in life.
, in my
opinion it
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opinion, it
is important to assess all the competences that intelligence consists of.

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  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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