Wealth does not necessarily guaranty happiness. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

The world has many millionaires but, not everyone is living their life to the fullest. Some say, that being rich would not guarantee
joy
. I completely agree with
this
statement as I believe that many things can be bought with money,
however
not everything. Feelings cannot be bought with money.
In other words
, human life is complicated creation of god and a part of
this
creation are emotions, being joyful or sad is a feeling that we get based on a situation or a position
someone
is in.
For example
, feeling
someone
would get on instances
such
as loss of
someone
's parents or birth of a new born baby simply cannot be bought nor overturned with cash, no matter how rich that person might be. Some achievements have a sentimental value. Critics who think that everything has a value may argue that any materialistic items can be purchased money which will eventually bring
joy
. While, I agree partially with
this
statement I do not agree with the latter.
For instance
, If
joy
can be purchased
then
why would some of the richest in the world still climb Mount Everest, while risking their life?
This
is simply because, inner satisfaction cannot be measured and does not have a monetary face value. In conclusion, Situations and a position
someone
is in can bring
joy
or great sorrow,
however
the feelings which comes along with these emotions simply cannot be reversed or purchased.
Also
, some of the great achievements are not done with fortune in mind but with self satisfaction.

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