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The main purpose of public libraries is to provide books, and they should not waste their limited resources and space on providing expensive hi-tech media such as computer software, videos and DVDs.

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The general aim of libraries is to share data. They can see it and make hi-tech media more
reacheble
easily approached
reachable
 for all. The education
releates
make a logical or causal connection
relates
related
 to the Internet more than books. It was created for exchanging an information. There are many sites and services which provide different
knowladge
the psychological result of perception and learning and reasoning
knowledge
 and different type of studying. So if libraries provide access to them,
this
 will be better than all books in there.
However
 a lot of people have
different view
Suggestion
a different view
to
Suggestion
of
this
quastion
an instance of questioning
question
questions
. They were learning with books and can not
imagane
form a mental image of something that is not present or that is not the case
imagine
 how to do it in
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
 way.
Unfortiontly
 for them,
scientist
Suggestion
scientists
a scientist
 made a
recerche
systematic investigation to establish facts
research
 and prove that practicing is the most useful way
for
Suggestion
of
 studying.
There
Suggestion
Their
 days major way
for
Suggestion
of
 education is a hi-tech media.

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