Today, travelers are traveling than ever before. Why is this the case? What are the benefits of traveling for the traveler?

Nowadays, the number of tourists has increased significantly thanks to the decrease of travel costs, especially considering the positive consequences to the personal life of travellers. Travelling has become less expensive than in the past due to the launch of low-cost companies in several countries, since flight tickets can now be bought for one-
third
of old prices without the addition of dispensable services, as a consequence, visiting new areas has become financially possible
to
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for
all social classes.
For instance
, air plane companies in
europe
the 2nd smallest continent (actually a vast peninsula of Eurasia); the British use 'Europe' to refer to all of the continent except the British Isles
Europe
frequently sale tickets to international destinies for less than fifty euros, which is only 5% of the minimum salary of France.
Additionally
, hospitality in
touristic
regions has a better variety of places and prices than years ago, because of the launch of apps
such
as Airbnb that offer alternative options over traditional hotels,
as a result
, the costs of hospitality has drastically reduced to all travellers. The
first
advantage of visiting a different region is knowing new cultures, as in a trip, tourists have the opportunity of seeing local traditions that are uncommon
to
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for
them,
therefore
they may better understand and respect other peoples.
For example
, after expending three weeks in a
muslim
of or relating to or supporting Islamism
Muslim
country, I have started to understand the religion and admire their faith, which would be harder throughout books or videos.
Secondly
, travels
gives
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give
are given
the opportunity to learn other languages, since locals might
do not
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do, not
speak our native language,
as a result
, travellers commonly return to their countries with some knowledge in English, Spanish, and so on. To conclude, in
modern age
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the modern age
, it is possible to travel cheaper than before, due to the existence of low-cost flight tickets as well as
unexpensive
relatively low in price or charging low prices
inexpensive
hospitality options. Generally in travels, not only can visitors learn about diverse traditions, but
also
learning other languages.
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