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‘The Internet will never replace traditional course books in schools.’ How far do you agree with this prediction?

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With the advent of technology,
internet
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 has been a great source of
information
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 as it is available in abundance. Nowadays, various school students are spending
huge time on
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time on the huge internet
huge time on the internet
internet
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, in order to gather study material online. There has always been a debate that
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internet
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the internet
 will never substitute
course
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 books prescribed by the board. I completely agree that
Course
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 books cannot be replaced by modern technology. To embark with, school books are designed according to the academic curriculum decided by the board by keeping in mind, knowledge required by students
in
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particular grade
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a particular grade
particular grades
. While designing books, average Intelligence level is taken into consideration so all the students can easily understand the content. With the help of books all the essential
information
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 is compiled
at
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in
 one place which enables a student to understand the topic more effectively. There are various regulating bodies which conduct various audits on the content being published to make sure that only relevant details are printed in the books. Admittedly,
internet
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 has been a beneficial source as it helps students to access
information
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 at
a
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an
 economical price. But, there is so much content available on
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internet
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the internet
 that it becomes tough for students to differentiate between genuine material and doubtful material. In some schools,
for instance
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, students who don't buy
course
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 books download all the available
information
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 from
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internet
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the internet
 which is vague material.
Also
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, there is no control
on
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of
 the
information
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 being posted on
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internet
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the internet
, various websites publish study material which is not approved by universities. To conclude, traditional
course
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books plays
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books, play
books play
 a crucial role in educating students in a streamlined manner and
internet
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 is not a substitute
to
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for
 books.
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Internet
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The internet
 can be of help in various academic projects, if used under proper control and supervision.
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,
majority
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the majority
 of students are successfully achieving their goal by entirely relying on
course
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 books
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