Throughout the history, people dream to live in a perfect society while they haven’t agrees how the ideal society would be like. What is the most important element you think to make a perfect society? What do people do to achieve an ideal society

People

still have a dream about a perfect

society

and try to enhance it constantly by improving aspects of

society

. In my opinion, the most important element is that we have not actually found realistic solutions to approach a perfect community.

Education

is of crucial importance as it lays the foundation

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the construction of an ideal

society

.

Firstly

,

the

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education

may have

direct

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impact on different

aspect

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aspects

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of

people

such

as academics, mindset, knowledge, perception, and professional skill,

as well as

on communications

society

.

Therefore

, increasing

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education

is the best way to boost the number of high-quality workers.

For instance

, thanks to Bill Gates’ Microsoft Office program,

people

can store more information,

more

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material over many years without

many efforts

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.

Therefore

,

people

don’t need to waste too much time,

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and space to store.

Besides

,

this

also

allows employees to be just as productive at home as they could be if they were sitting in front of a computer in their office. That makes the efficiency of the business increase considerately.

Additionally

, that helps members of a professional class focus on social issues

such

as polluted environment or social evil etc. From my perspective, to have a perfect community the most important factor should be that citizens have a wise decision in electing an appropriate leader. Definitely, nations cannot develop and succeed without powerful leaders. Thanks

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the

education

developed, it has provided

society

with many

people

of great talent.

Then

the elect can help the country propose optimal solutions.

For example

, they have invested in universities

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providing students with scholarships or

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them

in

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school fees. At the same time that helps students to develop the skills and knowledge employers need.

Besides

, scholarships can support them to approach

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environment and collect useful experiences.

Therefore

, in the future, they will become good citizens and bring back practical knowledge to

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society

better and better.