The increase in mobile phone use in recent years has transformed the way we live, communicate and do business. Mobile phones can also be the cause of social or medical problems. What forms do these problems take? Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of mobile phones?
Technological advances in Communications sector are increasing at a rapid pace. When compared to the simpler
times of
letters, postcards, telegrams and inland letters today's means of communication are more complex. Through the illustrations in Accept comma addition
times, of
this
essay I aim to show that despite of complexities involved in using mobile phones and internet
, advantages of using faster means of communications Suggestion
the internet
definetly
outweigh the disadvantages of social and medical problems. without question and beyond doubt
definitely
Also
, I will be mentioning few measures the public can take to mitigate the disadvantages.
The huge advantage of having a mobile phone is it is possible to connect with family and friends in an instant
. For Instance
, when I travel or go out in the city, it is easier for my family to know where I am at any given moment and reach out to me for something as simple as an errand or share
news or track my whereabouts for safety reasons through services like instant
messaging and sharing live location. It is easier for me also
to reach out to them for same reasons
. In case of conducting Suggestion
the same reasons
business
; earlier deals would take a lot of time to close, as all parties involved would find it difficult to meet in person and iron out details. Today, audio and video conferencing facilities in corporates
Suggestion
in corporate
incorporates
has changed
not only the way meetings are conducted, Suggestion
have changed
also
the day to day business
activities. I have a client in Kerala for whom I provide branding solutions from my head office in Mumbai. I would only meet the client once in a year and rest
of the year the activities were conducted through mobile phones and emails. Along with making the world a smaller place to live in, there are other advantages too of using mobile phones, we no longer have to sit at our desk to do our jobs. High speed internet and cloud technologies have made it easier for me to access and Suggestion
the rest
share
information. There are applications to send
emails, make video calls, create and edit documents and many other Suggestion
sending
business
supporting applications.
It is the ease at which we are able to create, access and Suggestion
businesses
share
the information in real time forms the root cause of social problems. The parents give children the mobile phones for children's safety and their peace of mind. Instead
the children spend time playing games on it. Here the parents can keep this
in check by providing a very basic model of mobile phone and instill the habit of playing outdoors in
their children. The youth is gripped by the concept of Suggestion
with
instant
gratification that comes to them through social media platforms, which encourages them to share
every moment of their life to
public and get addicted to the virtual world. Even grown ups and some population of senior citizens find it fascinating to use mobile phones for Suggestion
in
instant
messaging platforms and share
every real or fake item of news with their contacts. It is the addicition
and constant use of the devices which keeps people in close contact with the harmful radiations emitted from them making people ill. The glare from the devises cause eye problems and being abnormally tolerant to and dependent on something that is psychologically or physically habit-forming (especially alcohol or narcotic drugs)
addiction
headcahes
. For the youth and adults, who cannot be governed, they have to take it upon themselves to curb the addiction of virtual world and start living in the reality.
In conclusion, I would like to say that family' s concern for their family member's safety is important and a something or someone that causes anxiety; a source of unhappiness
headaches
business man
has to adapt to the changing times to survive and thrive in the market. a person engaged in commercial or industrial business (especially an owner or executive)
businessman
Therefore
the technology has made it easy for people to stay in touch and work from the comfort of their homes. By implementing the mitigating strategies for disadvantages
, the social and medical problems can be controlled and curbed to a large extent, while still being able to see your family and friends who are far away through a video call.Suggestion
the disadvantages
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