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More students travelling abroad for further education. Do you believe the advantages of this experience are greater than the drawbacks associated with it?

#students #education
Nowadays
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many students tend to
enroll
register formally as a participant or member
enrol
 foreign universities for complete their higher studies
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In my opinion
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I think,
this
 trend has more positive aspects than drawbacks
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Firstly
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 entering international university help to students to mix with
massive cultural diverse
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the massive cultural diversity
massive cultural diversity
 which enable to expand the knowledge about various ethnic groups and traditions.
For example
, In
Uk
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UK
 universities overseas students represent a large proportion which coming from different countries
such
 as India,
china
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China
,
saudi
of or relating to Saudi Arabia or its people
Saudi
 Arabia that proving huge diversity. Being with them help to understand each
countries
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country
 values, tradition, culture respecting each other
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Furthermore
, having
a
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an
 internationally recognized academic qualification and language proficiency helps to find a well paid job easily all around the world
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for
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For
 instance,
student
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students
a student
 who
enter
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enters
 Chinese university must learn
chinese
a native or inhabitant of Communist China or of Nationalist China
Chinese
 language in order to complete his studies which open more high salary
chinese
a native or inhabitant of Communist China or of Nationalist China
Chinese
 jobs in
future
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the future
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 Even though studying international university bring more positive results
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 students
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have
 to stay away their family and loved ones long period of time bring
detrimenatl
(sometimes followed by 'to') causing harm or injury
detrimental
 health issues. International students have to
stay another country
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stay in another country
 away from their family and has to manage every needs without help
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For example
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student
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the student
a student
 has to find expenses for accommodation, food as well as studies doing part time job while balancing their studies.
This
 will bring detrimental health issues
such
 as anxiety and depression. In conclusion, enrolling a foreign campus help to uplift knowledge about different
culture d
marked by refinement in taste and manners
cultured
 languages while opening international careers, it
also
 has a drawback which
elevate
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elevates
students
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students'
student
 health problems
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