In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for government to impose a higher tax on this kind of food . To what extent do you agree?

In the past few years, there has been an increase in the number of mortals suffering from health problems

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of eating too many meals. Some citizens believe that imposing higher taxes on unhealthy dishes may help them reduce the amount of edibles they digest. I believe that

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might not be the right method to decrease the number of people

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are suffering from nutritional problems. As it can do more harm than it already has.

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, fast food provides millions of jobs across the world. Raising the cost could reduce sales and force the restaurant to shut down.

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could negatively impact the worker who has a low-income position.

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, residents should have the freedom

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what they want to eat. Imposing the taxes could

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that the government is restricting them from eating fast foods.

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, increasing the rates may lead to individuals finding cheaper options.

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as snacks, street foods, and sugary drinks, which can damage human

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health more than it already did. Rather than hoisting the price up, the government should invest in public health campaigns and teach people about a balanced diet.

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, taxes on fast food may encourage the community to eat healthy dishes.

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,

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might create financial burdens, harm businesses, and some human beings may keep on eating unhealthy nutrition.