In many countries the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main causes of crime? How can we deal with those causes?

Crime

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is

very old phenomenon

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a very old phenomenon

and no one knows

axactly

indicating exactness or preciseness

exactly

when it started. The

crime

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rate is spiking including murder, snatching, money laundering and etc. In

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essay,

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I

will examine the some reasons

contirbuting

tending to bring about; being partly responsible for

contributing

to

crime

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and will

also

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suggest some mitigating factor for the same.

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of all, the main reason is the unemployment that will edge people to commit

offence

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an offence

, a bunch of people

invlove

connect closely and often incriminatingly

involve

in

crime

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, due to

imbalance

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an imbalance

the imbalance

created by the society or Government,

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, Imbalance distribution of wealth among the society, which causes poor to transform certainly

in to

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into

more low life and wealthy becomes

more wealthier

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wealthier

more wealthy

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of that it create chaos in society which leads people to use unfair means to get the stuff they required.

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,

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,

the

drug

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addiction contributing more in enhancing the

crime

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level around the globe,

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, a recent study shows that most of

drug

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abbuser

treat badly

abuse

will commit

crime

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to

fulfiil

put in effect

fulfil

their

drug

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needs

,

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finally

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,

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not a major

casue

give rise to; cause to happen or occur, not always intentionally

cause

case

but violence on

televeison

broadcasting visual images of stationary or moving objects

television

and movies is

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a contributing factor.

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, there are

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a homogeneous mixture of two or more substances; frequently (but not necessarily) a liquid solution

solution

seating

available to tackle the violence rate. In

fact a

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fact, a

recent research

prove

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proves

that providing better employment opportunities and education system results in

halted

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halting

crime

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rate,

furthermore

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, there has been little

succes

an event that accomplishes its intended purpose

success

against drugs, so

obeserving

quick to notice; showing quick and keen perception

observing

stringent action against

drugs

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drug

traffickers can be another solution, to exemplify

,

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,

checking cross border supplies from

another

not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied

other

nations. After having

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to consider or examine in speech or writing

discussed

the most pertinent point of

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issue, the major cause

are

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is

unemployment and drugs, various

methods methods

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methods, methods

is

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are

available like creating employment, Keeping an eye on

drug

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traffickers which can prevent from worsening.