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Is freedom of speech necessary in a free society? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

#freedom #speech #society
It is true that
right
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the right
 to
freedom
 and speak is
a
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an
 important
right
 of
free world
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the free world
. While I agree that it is a beneficial for
society
, I believe that too much
freedom
also effect
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also affects
also affect
 the people in
bad manner
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a bad manner
the bad manner
. On the one hand, there are numerous of benefits regarding
importance
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the importance
 of
freedom
 of
speech
 in democratic
society
.
First
 and foremost reason,
right
 to
speech
 means
describe
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describes
 the feeling in words in among
people
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the people
. And it
also help
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also helps
has also helped
 the folks to take in
productive manner
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a productive manner
 because communication is must to deal with any kind of business or talk between people.
Therefore
, these pros prove that
freedom
 of
speech
 necessary in free
society
.
On the other hand
, there are
plethora
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a plethora
 of reasons behind why humankinds think that necessity of
freedom
 of
speech
 in
free
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a free society
society
 would be not good in living area.
Firstly
, every
people
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person
speak
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speaks
 that words which might
heart
any physical damage to the body caused by violence or accident or fracture etc.
hurt
 the other person which may
effects
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affect
affects
 the
society
 in bad ways.
Additionally
, sometimes due to
thus
right
 people
misbeahave
behave badly
misbehave
 with their elder which might
effected
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affect
affected
 their relationships.
Thus
, these cons
proof
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proofs
 that too much
freedom
 of
speech
 would not better for
world
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the world
. In conclusion, I would like to reiterate that
right
 to
freedom
 necessary in democratic living world but
for
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to
 some extent.

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