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The range of technology available to people is increasing the gap between the rich and the poor. Other think it has an opposite effect. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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The difference in quality of life between groups of people in the
society
 remains a highly controversial issue. While one thinks that a level of life has increased overall because of a technological revolution, other claims that
also
 it's extremely beneficial for the richest groups.
Personally I
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Personally, I
 think that a
techlonogical
based in scientific and industrial progress
technological
 and scientific progress benefits educated people, no matter whether they are
currentry
at this time or period; now
currently
 rich. Overall, persons who are educated enough to understand the progress will move go the groups of rich.
First
 of all, breakthroughs in technology will decrease the
ammount
a quantity of money
amount
 of non qualified work available
at
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on
 the job market. Many types of work will be done with the help of machines making some people jobless. Due to
this
 it would have become
more clear
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clearer
 that
education
 is a key strategy and it makes chances to become rich higher. To rely on any permanent job will be a hopeless idea.
For example
, everybody
hear
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hears
 about Bill Gates or Steve Jobs, persons for whom progress in technology became crucial and made them one of the
reachest
possessing material wealth
richest
.
In addition
 to that, the access to
education
 will become easier than before. The difference in
education
 has been the one of the most significant features of the richest. But because of unlimited information provided
in
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on
 the Internet,
this
 tendency will change.
Soon
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So on
 the level of
education
 will depend only on your motivation, desire and, in some
sence
a general conscious awareness
sense
senses
scenes
, of your abilities. The well-established class system will be no longer a stable system, the
society
 will be
moew
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more
meow
 homogeneous. In conclusion, innovations can have a great impact on
society
 in general. The previous
society
 patterns will be totally
reduntant
more than is needed, desired, or required
redundant
. Motivated and talented people will have chances to rule financial flows. No
doubts
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doubt
 that everybody of us will benefit and admire
such
 a situation.

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