You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangements and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter:- 1. describe your situation 2. explain your problems and why it is difficult to work 3. say what kind of accommodation you would prefer.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to let you know that I am unhappy with the
room
allotted to me. The
room
itself is fine, but
intolerable
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activities of my roommate make me difficult to work. I am hopeful of receiving your support in
this
matter. The main problem I am facing is that my fellow mate plays loud music during the evening time, which is my study time and disrupts my concentration completely.
Further
, he invites his friends to our
room
for the weekend party. It becomes difficult to sleep during those days.
As a result
of which I feel
sleep deprived
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all the time. I have requested him several times but in vain. My academic record is declining day by day, which is a serious issue of concern for me. Keeping my condition in mind, I hope you will help me. I request you to either give me a new
room
or get me a new fellow mate. In either case, I require a quieter
room
or an understanding roommate. I hope you will understand the urgency of my problem and help me. Yours Faithfully, Jack Jones
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