City living in the 21st century is stressful and offers no advantage. To what extent do you agree or disagree to this statement.

At the present time, it is often argued that residing in the urban areas produce myriad of pressure and yield no benefit. Even though metropolis can be stress-laden, I do not conceive that it offers no gain. People who argue that living in the
city
is burdensome and gives no benefit do so because of hi
gh transportation fee a
Suggestion
high transportation fees
the high transportation fee
nd expensive house rent. To begin with, they believe that one has to pay enormous amount of money to move from home to workplace ev
eryday.
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every day
This
is
as a result
of unavailability of taxi/buses to meet up with the population demand. One example of
this
is Lagos
city
. Here, during early mo
rning especially r
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morning, especially
ush-hour, people have to wait for lo
ng time t
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a long time
o get a bus and at the same time pay the price.
Also
, there is up
surge i
Suggestion
an upsurge
n the number of persons relocating to the cities day by day, accelerating demand for accommodation.
Consequently
, the house rent becomes more expensive. To illustrate, a co
nfortable s
providing or experiencing physical well-being or relief
comfortable
ingle room in Lagos cost close to two hundred and fifty thousand na
ira (
Suggestion
Naira
more
#250, 000) annually.
Therefore
, they consider
city
life disadvantageous. In spite of
this
, lots of benefits follows living in the urban areas.
First
and foremost, it pr
ovide m
Suggestion
provides
ore job opportunity and adequate atmosphere for career development. There are Innumerable Industries and offices scattered around the
City
, constantly creating vacancies for one to secure an appointment.
For instance
, most of the job available in the jo
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jobber man
re all situated in the
city
of Lagos and Abuja respectively.
In addition
, those who settled in the
city
relishes immense infrastructures ranging from good roads, twenty four hours electricity, school, and other technological advancements. These ma
kes l
Suggestion
make
are made
iving easier and
also
revolutionize communication within the metropolis. On the whole, in contempt of the taxing nature of dwelling in the urban areas, I argue that it pr
ovide n
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provides
umerous favours to the residents to enjoy
city
-life and comfort. 252 words
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