In many countries today, parents are able to send their children to single-sex schools or co-education schools. Some people think that children going to single-sex schools have disadvantages later in life. To what extent do you agree.

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Parents of today

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send

their wards

to wards

near

towards

to single

sex

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schools which many countries practice.

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essay will discuss the opinion that single

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schools

brings

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bring

out the best in the ward

acdemically

in regard to academic matters

academically

and it

breakes

terminate

breaks

the chain of inferiority complex.

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, single

sex

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schools

enables

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enable

the student to flow well with his or her colleagues, they are able to study

wellto

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well to

achieve the grades that he or she wants.

they

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They

been

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have been

were

single

sex

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they understand themselves very well and

doesnt

does not

doesn't

feel shy when approaching the other for help in terms of studies. To illustrates single

sex

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schools turns to perform much better in academics than mixed schools. In all single

sex

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schools is much better than joints schools.

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, there is competition in single

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schools in terms of academics

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one is able to perform an activity without thinking

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is for boys or girls only. Example is female

students

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student

learning mechanics.

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sex

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school she

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school, she

is able to learn it

efficeintly

with efficiency; in an efficient manner

efficiently

and effectively without thinking is a male job.

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a male learning how to attach

artificail

contrived by art rather than nature

artificial

nails is able to do it well without facing any challenge from a female competitor.

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all single

sex

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takes out inferiority complex and that helps one to perform in each particular field of study. In conclusion, many parents are taking their wards to single

sex

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schools and

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the

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is practised by many countries

now adays

the period of time that is happening now; any continuous stretch of time including the moment of speech

nowadays

because their wards are able to study well to

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take something or somebody with oneself somewhere

bring

out the best in them and the chain of inferiority complex is broken.

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totally disagree

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totally disagrees

with the statement.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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265 words

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