In many countries today, parents are able to send their children to single-sex schools or co-education schools. Some people think that children going to single-sex schools have disadvantages later in life. To what extent do you agree.

Parents of today
sends
Suggestion
send
their wards
to wards
near
towards
to single
sex
schools which many countries practice.
This
essay will discuss the opinion that single
sex
schools
brings
Suggestion
bring
out the best in the ward
acdemically
in regard to academic matters
academically
and it
breakes
terminate
breaks
the chain of inferiority complex.
Firstly
, single
sex
schools
enables
Suggestion
enable
the student to flow well with his or her colleagues, they are able to study
wellto
Suggestion
well to
achieve the grades that he or she wants.
they
Suggestion
They
been
Suggestion
have been
were
single
sex
they understand themselves very well and
doesnt
does not
doesn't
feel shy when approaching the other for help in terms of studies. To illustrates single
sex
schools turns to perform much better in academics than mixed schools. In all single
sex
schools is much better than joints schools.
Secondly
, there is competition in single
sex
schools in terms of academics
,
Accept space
,
one is able to perform an activity without thinking
this
is for boys or girls only. Example is female
students
Suggestion
student
learning mechanics.
be
a light strong brittle grey toxic bivalent metallic element
Be
it a single
sex
school she
Accept comma addition
school, she
is able to learn it
efficeintly
with efficiency; in an efficient manner
efficiently
and effectively without thinking is a male job.
Also
a male learning how to attach
artificail
contrived by art rather than nature
artificial
nails is able to do it well without facing any challenge from a female competitor.
in
Suggestion
In
all single
sex
takes out inferiority complex and that helps one to perform in each particular field of study. In conclusion, many parents are taking their wards to single
sex
schools and
th
definite article
the
though
this
is practised by many countries
now adays
the period of time that is happening now; any continuous stretch of time including the moment of speech
nowadays
because their wards are able to study well to
being
take something or somebody with oneself somewhere
bring
out the best in them and the chain of inferiority complex is broken.
this
Suggestion
This
essay
totally disagree
Suggestion
totally disagrees
with the statement.
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