Celebrities make a very good living out of media attention and have chosen to live in the public spotlight.They have no right to complain when they feel the media are intruding on their privacy.

Many popular actors and actresses stay out of media attention live in a better environment and have
accostomed
(often followed by 'to') in the habit of or adapted to
accustomed
to live in the public spotlight.They don't have to make any complaints against
media
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the media
when they think that
media
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the media
are interrupting their
confiedential
entrusted with private information and the confidence of another
confidential
life.I almost agree with the statement yet there are
few points
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a few points
that
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I
also
need to mention about it.
First
of all
,
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,
getting addicted to do all the things in front of
camera
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the camera
and exposing in the public is the main reason which shows
impact
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the impact
on media.
For example
,
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,
recently famous bollywood couple
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a recently famous Bollywood couple
recently famous Bollywood couple
celebrated their anniversary in the middle of the
newyork
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new York
new york
street
such
that people in the street came over and had a glimpse of their enjoyment while
media
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the media
have done their job by recording and telecasting to everyone.
This
won't happen if celebrities keep it private.
Secondly
,
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,
celebreties
a widely known person
celebrities
think that media involving in their private life.Media is doing its responsibility.Its role is to bring each and every information to public.When they do so they don't have any right to complain about
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the media
.
For instance
,
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,
the crimes and human rapes are being revealed in the public by
media
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the media
.People came to know
this
and decided to protect themselves from society.Despite of blaming them
,
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,
everyone should support media. To sum up
,
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,
celebrities must lead their life in a confidential way and they should not be
blame
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blamed
media.Everyone wants to be
popular but
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popular, but
it should have some limits.

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