Celebrities make a very good living out of media attention and have chosen to live in the public spotlight.They have no right to complain when they feel the media are intruding on their privacy.

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Many popular actors and actresses stay out of media attention live in a better environment and have

accostomed

(often followed by 'to') in the habit of or adapted to

accustomed

to live in the public spotlight.They don't have to make any complaints against

media

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the media

when they think that

media

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the media

are interrupting their

confiedential

entrusted with private information and the confidence of another

confidential

life.I almost agree with the statement yet there are

few points

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a few points

that

refers to the speaker or writer

also

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need to mention about it.

First

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of all

Accept space

getting addicted to do all the things in front of

camera

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the camera

and exposing in the public is the main reason which shows

impact

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the impact

on media.

For example

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recently famous bollywood couple

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a recently famous Bollywood couple

recently famous Bollywood couple

celebrated their anniversary in the middle of the

newyork

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new York

new york

street

such

Linking Words

that people in the street came over and had a glimpse of their enjoyment while

media

Suggestion

the media

have done their job by recording and telecasting to everyone.

This

Linking Words

won't happen if celebrities keep it private.

Secondly

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celebreties

a widely known person

celebrities

think that media involving in their private life.Media is doing its responsibility.Its role is to bring each and every information to public.When they do so they don't have any right to complain about

media

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the media

For instance

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the crimes and human rapes are being revealed in the public by

media

Suggestion

the media

.People came to know

this

Linking Words

and decided to protect themselves from society.Despite of blaming them

Accept space

everyone should support media. To sum up

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celebrities must lead their life in a confidential way and they should not be

blame

Suggestion

blamed

media.Everyone wants to be

popular but

Accept comma addition

popular, but

it should have some limits.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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Topic Vocabulary:

Public spotlight
Media intrusion
Social contract
Paparazzi
Ethical limits
Mental health
Privacy rights
Public persona
Harassment
Media scrutiny

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Celebrities make a very good living out of media attention and have chosen to live in the public spotlight.They have no right to complain when they feel the media are intruding on their privacy.

Your opinion

Some people think that it's a good idea to socialize with work colleagues during evenings and weekends. Other people think it's important to keep working life completely separate from social life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In some countries, it is now possible for people to buy products made in other countries. To what extent do the benefits of this development outweigh the problems?

Task Two In modern society, it is common for employees to work overseas and take their families with them. What are the advantages and disadvantages for employees and their families? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? You should You should spend around 40 minutes on this task.