Some people think that foreign visitors should be charged more than local when they visit cultural and tourist attractions in a country. To what extent do you agree with this view?

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Cultural and
tourist
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attractions are representing a
country
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. A few numbers of people claim that international tourists should be paid more
money
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than local citizens to visit cultural and historical
tourist
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places. In my point of view, I do not agree with
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view if the differences are quite low between local and international tourists it should be the proper judgment. Every
country
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has many cultural and
tourist
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attractions. Local people spent their pleasure time with their family or friends to go to
tourist
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attractions. Some
tourist
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spots need to care and repair. So, these sites have a
ticket
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system. Every person needs a
ticket
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to entry these spots. But most of the countries have a rule for international tourists. They demand a very higher
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price
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than local visitors. Sometimes, the amount is very excess than local peoples.
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, my brother and his friends were going to India. They went to the Tajmahal for visiting. But when they were going to enter that place, they need tickets. The
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price
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was 100 Indian rupees for local tourists but international tourists, the
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price
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was 500 Indian rupees per person which is 5 times higher than a local
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. At
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, they paid 500 rupees for each
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and enter to the Tajmahal.
On the other hand
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, many cultural and
tourist
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spots need proper caring and repairing. A large number of amount needs to fix it. Authority decides to a
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system to enter to the spots. The
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price
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is the same as local and international tourists. Every week a large number of tourists go there to spend their time, so the authority income much
money
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from the
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. They do not need to extra
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from international visitors. If they do, they can increase a small amount of
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for every
ticket
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. International tourists can focus on our historical
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spots. Suppose, in our
country
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has many
tourist
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spots. Some spots have a
ticket
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system, but all the
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prices are the same. So foreign tourists cannot face any problem in visiting
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site. In conclusion, foreign visitors help to
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's GDP growth and they represent the
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spot in different countries where they are going. In my opinion, foreign tourists should be charged the same as local citizens.
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way gives a positive impact on a
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and many international tourists come here every time.
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