politicians are more responsible for protecting of the environment than individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

The
environment
is having a very bad effect
day
by
day
.
and
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And
many people think
politician
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a politician
politicians
are
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is
more respectable for saving
environment
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the environment
than normal people. I agree as much as
disagee
be of different opinions
disagree
with
this
statement.
To
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Two
comments
,
Accept space
,
firstly
,
government
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the government
have to make strict rules for saving
environment
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the environment
because of people must follow
this rules
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these rules
this rule
.
and
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And
government
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the government
are
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is also helping
also helps
has also helped
also
help to reduce
environment
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environmental
pollution.
for
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For
example
,
Accept space
,
Gandhinagar, which is
green
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the greenest
city in Asia.
creating
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Creating
the green city of Gandhinagar.
government
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Government
trise
the act of testing something
trials
tries
trees
in different method.
government
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Government
starts encourage people for protecting
environment
.
secondly
Accept comma addition
Secondly, Government
Secondly Government
Government
have to ban products.
which
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Which
are harmful for
environment
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an environment
like
plastic
.
plastic
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Plastic
are more harmful for
nature
and many
country
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countries
have banned on
plastic
. Because one material use to made
plastic
.
This
material is never destroyed.
Thirdly
,
Accept space
,
many people blame to politician for protecting
environment but
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the environment, but
the environment but
this
is wrong.
because
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Because
only
government
do not protest
environment
for that people have to help too for Saving
Nature
.
for
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For
example, Ahmedabad, which is located in
states
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the states
of Gujarat. Ahmedabad people always help the politician in protecting the
environment
. People encourage to
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
person for reducing pollution. They make
to
being one more than one
two
rules for
nature
. They follow
this rules
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these rules
this rule
by people.
This
has been noted
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a republic in the Asian subcontinent in southern Asia; second most populous country in the world; achieved independence from the United Kingdom in 1947
India
leval
a position on a scale of intensity or amount or quality
level
levels
.
Finally
, people have to ignore products.
which
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Which
is deprivation for
nature
.
like
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Like
people use public transport because of saving air pollution.
and
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And
also
people have to use Eco-friendly products. To sum up, Technology have increasing
day
by
day
. And it is
also
lost
environment
. And many people are doing harm the
environment
to live easy life. But it is made
for
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from
nature
.
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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