Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarket in some countries, many small, local business are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people argued that closure of local business will lead to

extinction

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the extinction

of local communities due to significant development and massive expansion of supermarket in

majority

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the majority

of countries. I strongly agree with the former.

This

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essay would discuss my notion.

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with, in many developed countries, establishing malls and supermarkets enables the citizenry to shop at ease without undergoing the tussles and hassles to purchase products in local markets. These

development

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developments

tends

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tend

instill

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to instill

lost of hope to the sellers

at

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in

rural areas as they are no longer patronized. A research conducted by business marketers in 2018 at a local community market in

Nawfia Anambra state

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the Nawfia Anambra state

a Nawfia Anambra state

depicts they experienced

shortage

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a shortage

of sales of goods and services.

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, goods sold at supermarket are well scrutinised and thoroughly checked before human consumption. Inadvertently preventing usage of expired goods and products that would eventually lead to chronic health deterioration and death. Unlike the goods displayed at the local markets, they aren't investigated and monitored. These

act

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acts

tends

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tend

to cause more harm than good.

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, my colleague narrated the story of a butcher that sold out a contaminated meat at a cheaper rate to the community members which lead to food poisoning and inevitable death to the consumers of the society. After

futher

to or at a greater extent or degree or a more advanced stage ('further' is used more often than 'farther' in this abstract sense)

further

investigation, it was deduced that the massive death was due to the infected

meat thereby

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meat, thereby

leading to closure of the local market. In conclusion, set ups of supermarkets in some strategic areas of the country would affect the services and sales of the local sellers because it's more accessible and durable.