Whoever controls the media also controls opinions and attitudes of the people and there is little can be done to rectify this. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Throughout the history there were several attempts to curb and censor articles in the press. Nowadays it is still a pressing problem and measures must be taken to tackle it. As far as I am concerned, controlling society's
opinion
is only partially attainable for those who are in charge of the media.
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First
and foremost, nowadays people, a specially well educated ones, are not dependent on the media as they were before. Linking Words
For example
, they often distrust bias articles and try to form an Linking Words
opinion
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This
part of the society is aware that the government or big companies may own media sources and attempt to alter real facts to make themselves look better. In Linking Words
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day and age, with all of the state-of-the-art technologies and the existence of the internet, there are an abundance of ways to share thoughts without being censored.
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On the other hand
, there is a part of humankind that tends to believe everything they hear on the news or radio. These people are usually poorly educates or are older and living in remote areas. For them TV, radio and newspapers are the only source of information and a problem arises when they are owned by private companies. Linking Words
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the Contollers Linking Words
opinion
can easily be added to the news, Use synonyms
consequently
, only the proffered information is going to reach audiences, whereas the disliked one will remain censored.
All things considered, I can somewhat agree with the statement that the media is able to control one's attitude. There are two distinct categories of audiences: one of well educates, able to think outside the box and for their own Linking Words
opinion
and others, usually blue-collar workers or pensioners who have a strong belief in the media. Ambiguity seen in the media is a pressing problem and solution must be provided.Use synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite