“Prevention is better than cure”. Researching and treating diseases is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventive measures. To what extent do you agree?
Scientific research and medical treatment of illness is quite expensive, and
therefore
it appears logical to spend money in avoidance methods. Linking Words
This
essay agrees with the saying that, “Prevention is better than cure”. In Linking Words
this
essay the use of personal hygiene and environmental sanitation as cheap ways of enhancing our overall well being will be explored.
Linking Words
To begin
with, regularly caring for the body through hygienic measures appears to be a cost-saving practice in the long-term. While people who are meticulous in Linking Words
this
aspect enjoy being in good health, without needing to take drugs regularly, those who take Linking Words
this
for levity continue to suffer from problems Linking Words
such
as skin diseases. Linking Words
For example
, doctor’s diagnosis of ailments Linking Words
such
as Eczema and skin rash is often linked to Linking Words
such
patients neither having regular bath nor taking good care of their skin after bathing.
Another method considered less costly in maintaining public health is the observance of environmental sanitation. Linking Words
This
is crucial because it influences the general health of the people living in a particular community, Linking Words
hence
, can mitigate the widespread of diseases. Linking Words
For instance
, the sporadic spread of malaria in a community is unavoidable if there is stagnant water around the houses where people live, thereby costing them to spend money on hospital bills, which could have been Linking Words
otherwise
spent on other personal matters. For these reasons, keeping the society clean would continue to benefit us and help save significant funds.
In conclusion, it is agreed that we ought to take good care of our body daily and observe regular sanitation of the environment so as to prevent the prevalence of sickness in the society. Linking Words
This
appears to save the cost of finding out the cause of a sickness and the medication to be used.Linking Words
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Your opinion
Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.
If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.
Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.
Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion:
...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?