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An international company is offering job without pay for good experience write a letter to apply for this job in this letter where did you find this information why you want to apply for this job what qualification you have what position you want to apply

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Dear Sir/ Madam, I am writing in response to your advert on Indeed regarding some open volunteering opportunities at Schlegel Villages.I am driven by the exceptional services offered by your company and your unwavering commitment towards
senior's
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 care. I am particularly interested in applying for
recreation
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the recreation
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 assistant position so that I can excel in providing holistic care to clients. I am an international student from India currently enrolled in Recreation and Leisure
studies
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Studies
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 at
conestoga
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Conestoga
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 college. I have a clinical background in Physiotherapy back in my country.
Additionally
,I bring along my expertise in patient care
coupled with
 my current educational knowledge and practices in recreation. I am longing for
this
 opportunity to enhance my practical
hands on
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 skills to build a good rapport with
client
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. I have good communication skills
along with
 my empathetic and kind nature, compassion towards helping others,
self directed
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 personality which makes me an exceptional candidate for
this
 position. I would appreciate a
one on one
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 interview opportunity to showcase my skills and how my values align with those of Schlegel Villages. I hope
hearing
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 from you soon. Your's
Sincereley
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Sincerely
, Faiza Patel
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grammar
Ensure the possessive form 'Yours' is written without an apostrophe: 'Yours Sincerely'.
coherence cohesion
Mention where you found the job listing earlier in the letter to improve clarity.
task achievement
The letter clearly outlines the reasons for applying, qualifications, and the desired position.
coherence cohesion
The structure of the letter is logical with a clear introduction, body, and closing.
task achievement
The writing tone is polite and professional, which is suitable for a job application letter.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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