Air transport is increasingly used to transport fruit and vegetables to other countries where they cannot be grown or are out of season. Some people say this is good but others believe the use of air transport for this purpose is not justified. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Some people believe that using
air
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transport
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to support exporting fruit and vegetables to countries where they cannot be grown or are out of season is a positive
development
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.
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, other people argue that
this
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reason is not justified
for
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in
achieving
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purpose. One the positive side, supporters of
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development
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say that exporting fruit and vegetables with
air
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has opened up markets which encourage positive
development
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for countries.
For example
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, for local farmers in many poor countries,
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will be able to improve their income and standard of life qualities if they have
opportunity
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the opportunity
an opportunity
to sell their goods to faraway foreign markets with high prices
instead
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of producing staple crops for
local market
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the local market
local markets
with low prices or their own consumption.
As a result
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, farmers become more independent and do not depend on
government's aid
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the government's aid
.
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, a negative view to
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development
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is the impact on the environment. As we know that in
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day and age one of the biggest problems around
world
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the world
about earth is global warming and burning of fossil fuels in the form oil of
plane
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a plane
is one of
main factors
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the main factors
contributing global warming
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contributing to global warming
. To illustrate, over transporting million tonnes of food every day by
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transport
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can make
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problem to be more complex.
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is because from one flight,
air
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transport
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can release
large amount
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large amounts
a large amount
of Carbon Dioxide and other gases into
environment
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the environment
.
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, climate change in our earth cannot be
avoid
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avoided
if
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trend
continuous
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continues
continue
continuing
continued
. To sum up, I would argue that there
is
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are
no justifications for
method
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a method
of exporting fruit and vegetables with
air
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. Even though many benefits can be taken from
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method especially for local farmers in poor countries, saving
earth
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the earth
from
further
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environmental damages is more essential.
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, for overcoming
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problem United Nations should release international trade regulation so that it can control and protect over using
air
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transport
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.
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