Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organised and in correct place. What is your opinion about this?
It has been suggested that living and working space need
to be
clean and tidy up everything. From my vantage point, I totally agree with Suggestion
be
this
opinion for the following reasons.
Home and Linking Words
workplase
should not be dirty or unorganised because a place where work is done
workplace
workplaces
that is
directly connected with Linking Words
hygenic
and health issues. a condition promoting sanitary practices
hygiene
hygienic
Firstly
, people Linking Words
stay
Suggestion
stays
at
living space most Suggestion
in
time
, if it was Use synonyms
hygenically
bad it is very harmful to general health of people. in a hygienic manner
hygienically
For example
, people who living in big and tidy cities, they do not have Linking Words
hygenic
issues because they are usually living a condition promoting sanitary practices
hygiene
hygienic
at
Suggestion
in
clean space
. Suggestion
a clean space
However
, people who staying Linking Words
africa
have very big issues of their health comes from unclean living condition. the second largest continent; located to the south of Europe and bordered to the west by the South Atlantic and to the east by the Indian Ocean
Africa
Secondly
, if Linking Words
workplace
was not tidy, efficiency of Suggestion
the workplace
labor
must a social class comprising those who do manual labor or work for wages
labour
bo
getting lower and lower because people need to have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)
be
spand
pass time in a specific way
spend
time
to find something for Use synonyms
work
, so organise Use synonyms
everthing
in all things
everything
workplace
is very important to get higher Suggestion
the workplace
performence
a dramatic or musical entertainment
performance
in
Suggestion
at
work
. Use synonyms
Lastly
, if workplace tidy and organised, other people can take over the task Linking Words
easly
, nowadays most with ease ('easy' is sometimes used informally for 'easily')
easily
easy
work
is teamwork so if it is tidy teamwork is going very smooth and easy.
If locations of living and working very tidy there are many benefits. Use synonyms
To begin
with, when people take a rest at home very Linking Words
comfortabley
. If people clean up their house every providing or experiencing physical well-being or relief
comfortable
time
in small mess they do not need to Use synonyms
spand
pass time in a specific way
spend
time
to Use synonyms
cleaning home
but Accept comma addition
cleaning, home
in real mess
which makes hard Suggestion
in a real mess
time
to Use synonyms
cleaning
. Suggestion
clean
In addition
, if Linking Words
work
Use synonyms
pleace
is tidy people can get better results from their a point located with respect to surface features of some region
place
places
work
. Use synonyms
As a result
, clean, tidy, and organised place Linking Words
give
good vibe and results to people. On a personal level I was not Suggestion
gives
person
who organising everything, at that Suggestion
the person
a person
time
my room and life was mess but now mostly organised and I am fine.
In conclusion, Use synonyms
form
my perspective, clean up, tidy up and organising a giver or sender
from
everythin
in home and all things
everything
bussiness
is very important to a commercial or industrial enterprise and the people who constitute it
business
businesses
every one
.all people
everyone
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