The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally. What are the advantages and disadvantages of having only 1 language in the world.

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Most
touritsts
someone who travels for pleasure
tourists
use English
langauge
a systematic means of communicating by the use of sounds or conventional symbols
language
as the communication tool while moving around the
world
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.
This
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makes English as the most prospective
langauge
a systematic means of communicating by the use of sounds or conventional symbols
language
languages
in the
world
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,
thougt
the content of cognition; the main thing you are thinking about
thought
taught
thoughts
by some of people to be the only spoken
one
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glonally
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global
globally
. Really
one
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of the main advantages of owning
one
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langauge
a systematic means of communicating by the use of sounds or conventional symbols
language
in the
world
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will
facilate
make easier
facilitate
the
communicaitons
the discipline that studies the principles of transmitting information and the methods by which it is delivered (as print or radio or television etc.)
communications
communication
among the
world
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.
In addition
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to
that it
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that, it
will
avoide
stay clear from; keep away from; keep out of the way of someone or something
avoid
abide
misunderstanding
reuslting
a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon
resulting
from translation between two different languages.
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, having only
one
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language
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worldwide will allow
clutures
a particular society at a particular time and place
cultures
to merge, differences to meet and
tradiations
an inherited pattern of thought or action
traditions
tradition
to be shared easily.
Many many
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Many, many
advantages we can
imagine but
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imagine, but
the most is that
one
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annonucement
a formal public statement
announcement
can be
delievered
bring to a destination, make a delivery
delivered
to the
world
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at once!
ON the other
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hand having
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hand, having
only
one
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language
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can affect the arts' innovations because only
one
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language
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would have lack of meanings, idioms or even some words.
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Furthermore some
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Furthermore, some
clutures
a particular society at a particular time and place
cultures
would melt in others and disappear. In fact the main drawback of owning only
one
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language
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is that it could
minimze
make small or insignificant
minimize
the spirit of knowing the others more
!
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!
as
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As
it
become
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becomes
the same
clutures
a particular society at a particular time and place
cultures
clusters
among the all, mistaking no new! In
conclustion
a position or opinion or judgment reached after consideration
conclusion
English
spready
distribute or disperse widely
spread
widely all over the
world
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for
toursim
the business of providing services to tourists
tourism
and study.
It
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It's
become a common tool for
coummuncations
the activity of communicating; the activity of conveying information
communication
communications
and prominent
language
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a head
at or in the front
ahead
.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Prominent
  • Contribute
  • Global
  • Advantages
  • Disadvantages
  • Communication
  • Understanding
  • Ease
  • Business
  • Trade
  • Cultural exchange
  • Unity
  • Access
  • Information
  • Simplify
  • Travel
  • Tourism
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