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Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

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Nowadays humans
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Nowadays, humans
 are producing more and more
rubbish
. Scientists argue why
this
 problem appears in human life. The role of governments in reducing the
amount
 of
rubbish
 should be more or less. The
amount
 of
waste
 we produce has increased.
This
 problem is a result of our consumer culture. Advertisers encourage us to buy the newest fashions. If something breaks, we throw it away and buy a new one.
Products
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The products
are not made
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have not been made
 to
last
. The
amount
 of household
waste
 is growing because most foods
are sold
Suggestion
sell
 non-biodegradable plastic packaging.
This
waste
 ends up in landfill sites. People do not think about the consequences of dropping
rubbish
. They assume that somebody is responsible for cleaning the streets, but they do not know who is
this
 somebody. Most of the litter seen on
streets
Suggestion
the streets
 is fast food packaging. The plastic packaging does not break down easily. Companies should make goods that
last
 longer. They should not use so much packaging. Governments should be stricter, about
waste
Suggestion
the waste
 produced by companies. They should put legal limits on the packaging. Consumers should avoid buying over-packaged products. We should recycle and reuse useful materials. There are collection banks for paper, glass and plastic bottles. Households can use several
rubbish
 bins to separate
waste
. Recycling saves energy and raw materials. Governments should invest in transforming human culture, away from consumerism towards a culture of sustainability. They could impose green tax on drivers and airline companies. Government campaigns should promote recycling. Individuals should
also
 try to be greener. We should recycle as much as possible. To summarise, it seems either governments or people should be responsible for the
amount
 of
rubbish
 is produced.
Also
, all human
being
Suggestion
beings
 should learn to be more environmentally friendly.
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