You have bought a ticket for a live concert (music program) but cannot attend it. so you decided to offer the ticket a friend. write a letter to him/her and say -give details about a concert explain -why you would not be able to attend the concert -suggest how your friend will receive the ticket.

#ticket #live #concert #music #program #offer #friend #-give #-why #-suggest

Dear Smith Hi, how are you

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I hope

this

letter finds you in the best of health and prosperity. It has been

long

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a long

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time to see you but you are always in my thoughts. You will be very glad to know that a live music concert is going to be held on 3rd March near your home in Kipps market. I had bought

ticket

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a ticket

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for

this

concert but

unfortunately

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I got

call

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a call

the call

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from my manager that I will have to attend an urgent meeting in Delhi on the same day.

Therefore

, it is impossible for me to attend

this

concert so I want to send

this

ticket

to you so that you can enjoy

this

opportunity. Jolly,

the

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one of our friends ,was

also

telling me that you were planning to buy

ticket

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a ticket

the ticket

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but due to

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Housefull

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the housefull

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housefull

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you could not. And it would be my pleasure to offer you

this

ticket

. More interesting, your favourite singer Gurdas Maan is going to perform here. I want you to collect

this

ticket

from my mother at my home because I have to leave for Delhi today in the evening

otherwise

I could give you the

ticket

. if you are not able to collect please write me back that how can you get it, I will try to do the same.

Finally

, closing the letter. Love for uncle and aunt. Waiting for your response. Love Anna George

Fri Jan 31 2020

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
10Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

234 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You have bought a ticket for a live concert (music program) but cannot attend it. so you decided to offer the ticket a friend. write a letter to him/her and say -give details about a concert explain -why you would not be able to attend the concert -suggest how your friend will receive the ticket.

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