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Machines have replaced physical work in many industries. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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In the evaluation of the human history,
life
 started getting easier with the inventions of the machines and
thoughtfull
having intellectual depth
thoughtful
 ideas to develop the machines. With the progress of science, various ideas have started getting implemented, lessening the human efforts. But as
coin
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a coin
 has 2 sides, the disadvantage of
this
 evaluation resulted into the new problems and concerns. According to me,
drawbacks
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the drawbacks
 of the machines getting introduced in almost all the
industried
the people or companies engaged in a particular kind of commercial enterprise
industries
 are more than
disadvantages
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the disadvantages
.
This
 essay will throw the light on the heavier side.
Initially
, when there is no much progress in science and machine development, human efforts are required. Because of which, there is
large number
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a large number
 of employment and living standards are
mainained
kept in good condition
maintained
.
For example
, when there were textile manufacturing meals, large number of people have jobs and their
life
 is much
stable
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more stable
 with the regular
incoms
the financial gain (earned or unearned) accruing over a given period of time
income
. But once the machines introduced in the textile industry, they lost their jobs and income stopped which resulted
into
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in
 many other problems of living and getting normal lives. Another thing is that, manual efforts were
giving
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given
 exercises
to
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of
 the body which was the source of much healthy
life
 style. But when machines were introduced, people started becoming lazy and previous healthy
life
 style got pampered.
This
resuulted
a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon
resulted
results
 in unhealthy and disease prone lives now a days. So in my opinion, to maintain the healthy and happy
life styles
a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
lifestyles
, converting all the industries automated should be judged and tested with all other circumstances and
then
 only they should get allowed with large number of machines.

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