Young people are indeed a group of people in
the
society, which should be protected. A vast majority Correct article usage
apply
doesn'
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don't
t
have enough experience to protect themselves fully, so how to ensure Use synonyms
safety
of young generations remains a highly controversial issue. Add an article
the safety
Nevertheless
, I think that Linking Words
such
a strong law, which Linking Words
prohibit
students Correct subject-verb agreement
prohibits
to go
away late, doesn'Change preposition
from going
t
solve the problem. Personally, I believe that Use synonyms
such
an approach won'Linking Words
t
decrease Use synonyms
crime
rate and it would cause other serious problems.
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the crime
To begin
with, going late at night doesn'Linking Words
t
necessarily put you in a dangerous position. The statement that darkness means danger can be discussed and argued. Use synonyms
According to
an article which I recently read, Linking Words
statistically
crimes don'Add a comma
statistically,
t
occur during the night more during the day. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, some places are utterly free every time, they are highlighted constantly and no risk would emerge there. It's a highly controversial statement that night activity should be controlled so much.
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Secondly
, a strong law like Linking Words
this
definitely makes a young person less free and doubly possible benefits cost Linking Words
such
a high price. I could imagine myself being in Linking Words
such
a situation and I would be quite depressed Linking Words
due to
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this
illogical and strict approach. Even in my Linking Words
family
any prohibition would somehow destroy my relationship with Add a comma
family,
parents
. Speaking of the government, the risk Correct pronoun usage
my parents
to raise
generations who would like anarchy emerges. Change preposition
of raising
To sum up
, a law shouldn'Linking Words
t
make so strong restrictions on a person's liberty.
In conclusion, strong methods of solving problems don'Use synonyms
t
prove themselves as reliable ones, especially in situations when their usage is not justified. Use synonyms
Overall
, our society should tend to find compromises where possible.Linking Words
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