The increase in mobile phone use in recent years has transformed the way we live, communicate and do business. Mobile phones can also be the cause of social or medical problems. What forms do these problems take? Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of mobile phones?

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issues

all over the World. In

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spesific

(sometimes followed by 'to') applying to or characterized by or distinguishing something particular or special or unique

specific

specified

. The number of use of cell

phone

is increasing as time goes by. So

this

trouble could cause harm to our health and communication skills.

To begin

with,

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would like to negative influences of mobile

phone

over the community.Undoubtedly using

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cell phone

affect our interactions with our friends and the people around us.

For example

, three days ago ı went to

restaurant

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a restaurant

the restaurant

and ı observed the table which is adjacent us and they were just sitting around the table together surfing on their

phone

constantly

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constantly, however

however

the most worst

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the worst

the worse

part is

accually

in actual fact

actually

once ı had finished my meal, ı looked them and they were consuming while they were using their phones. Until we left the restaurant

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ı am convinced that they never talked to one another.

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Therefore, I

Therefore I

am able to say that using

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the phone

a phone

more than sufficient might make you

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an

unsocial person or the person who does not know how to talk to others kindly.

Also they

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Also, they

ate the orders so fast because they merely concentrated on their phones. So it cause the problems in your stomach or gastrointestinal system which means it might occur the bigger health conditions

such

as obesity and

hypoactivity

a condition characterized by excessive restlessness and movement

hyperactivity

.

On the other hand

, indisputably there are advantages

such

as having

conversation

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a conversation

, keeping in touch regularly or studying everywhere. To be clear, ı met the guy one year ago who came to watch our basketball

game

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game, although

although

he had

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a

vital examination on the other day and when ı asked him why did you took

this

unneccessary

not necessary

unnecessary

risk

then

he told me that he already finished

study

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studying

during the match by using his smart

phone

.

However

the most affirmative effect for using

phone

over the public is you can always talk with your friends by face to face or just texting. İn conclusion,

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would like to say

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I

certain

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certainly

thought about the using

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a mobile phone

the mobile phone

phone

. I think the harms are more than the benefits for using

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the phone

.

Hence

, we ought to do our time management well.