Some scientists think that there are intelligent life forms on other planets and messages should be sent to contact them. Other scientists think it is a bad idea and would be dangerous. Disscus this topic and give your own opinions.

Technological developments provide us to enlighten the dark side of
space
as time goes by together with in my opi
nion we wi
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opinion, we
ll be able to meet aliens in two decades. More than 500,000 journal has been published in
las
t 15 years ag
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the last 15 years
o and according to the res
earchs
systematic investigation to establish facts
research
this
might be a record.
The
refore at th
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Therefore, at
e present time, we are not so far to the aliens as we were. One of the experts says that they found the key to invent a light velocity engine which unsure us to reach pla
nets qu
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the planets
icker than we thought.
How
ever according to
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However, according
the som
e gr
closely similar or comparable in kind or quality or quantity or degree
same
oup of experts and the some deputies
this
would be end with a catastrophic consequence due to deficiency of knowledge about aliens.
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eover they
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Moreover, they
also
think we should take back the sat
tellites we
man-made equipment that orbits around the earth or the moon
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cuse if
for the reason that; on account of
because
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detected by instinct or inference rather than by recognized perceptual cues
perceived
sent the these sat
telites to
man-made equipment that orbits around the earth or the moon
satellites
them ,
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,
is condition could make them annoyed.
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hand, I suppose that
hand I suppose that
we stopped the technological development for the
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this
might make us unambitious and purposeless because the main driver behind the technological improvements is the bringing light to the darknesses and obviously the most important darkness is the
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archs.
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uld like to call out to the experts to not to cease res
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