Some believe that eventually all jobs will be done by artificially intelligent robots. What is your opinion?
Some people opine that artificially intelligent robot will gradually replace human workers. In my opinion,
this
is very unlikely to happen. Simple human tasks can be performed by robots; Linking Words
however
, complex jobs requiring cognitive touch will still need to be done by humans. Linking Words
This
essay will discuss why only a few jobs will be replaced by robots and the others / the rest will continue to need human effort.
A Simple human tasks that are repetitive and conditional in nature can easily be automated. Linking Words
This
is because companies believe that the accuracy and productivity of high volume monotonous tasks are higher when performed by robots than humans. A survey on automation in back end banking process in India reveal that not only does the process errors drop by 95%, but Linking Words
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productivity increases by 80% if robotic automation is implemented. For these reasons, human effort on regular menial tasks can be replaced by robotic automation.
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On the other hand
, jobs requiring qualities like emotion and intuition will continue to be done by humans. Linking Words
This
is because fields like psychology will always need a doctor’s diagnosis. Linking Words
For instance
, in the USA, while all patients undergo computer based mental tests, the patient’s diagnosis can only be confirmed accurate by a psychiatrist post face to face counselling sessions. Linking Words
Hence
, many complex tasks that need human judgement cannot be replaced by robots.
To conclude, it is quite possible for robots to replace a few human jobs. Artificially intelligent robots can replace simple human tasks and support them in a few complex tasks; Linking Words
however
, they can never replace all complex tasks done by them. Ultimately, non monotonous tasks requiring a human touch can never be fully replaced.Linking Words
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite