Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter  explain the reasons for the noise  apologise  describe what action you will take

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Dear Mr Sipmson, I am writing to apologise for the constant howling of my

dog

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. I know it is been going on for a while, but I am trying to solve the situation as fast as I can. Two weeks ago, unfortunately, my

dog

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was hit by a car. He has got injuries all over his body and when he tries to move it is very painful for him and he starts to cry inconsolably.

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I am administering medication, I think the dosage is too low to suppress the pain. So I have decided to take him to the veterinary and intern him there until he heals completely. It breaks my heart because I will not have my

dog

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close to me, but I know

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will be the best decision for him as well as us. Hopefully

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in the animal centre, they will apply more effective painkillers so that, my

dog

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will no longer suffer anymore. I really apologise for all the

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you. Yours Sincerely, Andrea Garcia.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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7 paragraphs

174 words

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