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Band 7

A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary or unpaid work. you would like to do some voluntary or unpaid work at the Museum . write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary unpaid work. in your letter explain why you want to do voluntary work and the museum describe some skills and equality you have that would be useful . give details of when you would be available for work .

Dear Sir, I hope
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 letter to express my interest in doing a volunteer job at your "The Canadian History"
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 in Quebec. I have taken a keen interest in learning about the history and culture of distinct nations. I have heard that
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 is famous for the impressive collection of Canadian and international art.
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 features the world's largest collection of totem poles, which I find especially fascinating. I already worked in a
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 in my home country, where I learnt how to handle customers' queries if they want to know anything about the war equipment or about the antique items.
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 and looking for a part-time job. I will be available on weekends usually, or after 6 o'clock on weekends. I hope you will give me a chance to learn about Canadian history. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon! Yours faithfully, Sam.

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identification
Your note should say clearly if you want to do voluntary work with no pay. Put 'volunteer' or 'unpaid' in the first lines.
organisation
Use clear parts. One part for why you want the work, one for the skills and how you treat all people the same, one for when you can work.
style
Use simple words. Keep to words from the top 100. Some words here are a bit hard.
content
You tell why you want to work in the museum.
tone
The letter is polite and formal.
structure
You give days and times you can work.
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