The company you work for has decided to close the cafeteria, as the staff is not using it much. You are not happy with the decision. Write a letter to the director. Give reasons of low usage. How will it affect the staff? Suggest ways to improve it.

Dear Director, I am writing
this
letter to show my disagreement with the decision to close the
cafeteria
of company premise. My name is Neha and I work in the US
department
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of Pharmacovigilance for
last
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2 years. I have been visiting
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almost 2 or 3 times a week.
Also
, many of my colleagues are unhappy with
this
decision and request to rather improve the condition for more usage of the
cafeteria
. To illustrate, due to limited seating in
cafeteria
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not everyone is able to sit and eat their lunch. Earlier, four ovens were working and were used to heat tiffin in lunch when the cafe was preferred by everyone. Now, only one oven works which
leads
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to
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wait to preheat foods.
Furthermore
, the earlier food vendor had tastier foods to offer at reasonable prices. With decreased cleaning
staffs
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, it takes
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wait for tables to be cleaned. If the management looks into these basic amenities and
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them, the
cafeteria
will be preferred and used more often.
This
would prevent unemployment among their
staffs
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. Hoping for kind consideration regarding
this
matter from your side. Yours faithfully Neha

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